Tuesday, 20 March 2018

Purgatory script








PURGATORY

Written By

Alfie Curnow, Brandon Johnson & Kieran McNeill


























January 2018




FADE IN:




Sometime in the year 2018, Mysterious room filled with white light - Purgatory. Confined space. Two figures sitting opposite each other. Desk between one another. One door in the Room. Label illegible.  CLOCK TICKING can be heard but not seen.





Confused and looking around. Harvey Identifies that besides the DESK and the CHAIRS they were sitting on, no other objects were insight. Now worried and uncertain he begins to speak.




HARVEY

 Wha- Where Am I? Who are you?




GATEKEEPER

Welcome to Purgatory! Who I am is none of your concern, Just know that I am your only way out of this place.




HARVEY

Purgatory? Why am I here?
Purgatory? What is Purgatory? What am I doing here?





GATEKEEPER

Mr. Webber, please calm down. Prior to meeting you, I heard you were going to be a tough individual. It seems so far my evaluation on you was correct. Now, while you are required to be here.If you calm down I can begin answering any questions you may have for me. I’ll start with what this place is if that is helpful?





HARVEY

Fine. Just hurry up. I left the chicken in the oven cooking for the kids, I’ll need to get back to them soon.





 
GATEKEEPER

(PLANTS a case file labeled HARVEY WEBBER onto the desk)

I’m afraid we know you never had children Mr Webber and we also know everything there is to know about you so nothing like that will work on us.
We will be as short or as long as it takes you to admit to your many crimes.  




HARVEY

(Now WORRIED and CONCERNED)

If you have all this on me then why should I admit to anything?




 GATEKEEPER

I  may have this information on you but carefully placed red tape is preventing us from exonerating you until you have admitted to every crime and sin that was committed whilst you were alive.




HARVEY

Whatever.

(Looks away from the Gatekeeper and mumbles something)




 GATEKEEPER

(Becoming IMPATIENT)

My impatience is growing. Mr Webber, you’ve been nothing but uncooperative so far, I’ve had to calm you down, expose for your lies and now this. I suggest if you know what’s good for you and your afterlife state you’ll buck up your ideas and remember who’s in charge here.







HARVEY
(Mumbling)

Fine what do you want to know?




GATEKEEPER

Nothing complex. Just confess your sins.  




HARVEY

Okay. Well this was a long time ago. So do keep that in mind.

GATEKEEPER

I know.

HARVEY

When I was 15, I was part of a gang. We would pass the time by doing all sorts of stuff, from snorting gummy bears to Illegal dog breeding. Sometimes we would even break into people's homes in attempt to make a quick buck.




 GATEKEEPER




Snorting gumm-.. Never mind. Now, Mr Webber, tell me more about your burglary ordeals. You act like you burgled quite a few different houses but we both know it was only one. Don’t we?   




HARVEY




Why do you even care?!




GATEKEEPER

Touched a nerve I see?




HARVEY

It was a couple of years ago, In order to get into the gang I had to do complete some sort of initiation.. The one way to prove myself worthy was to rob that house.




GATEKEEPER

But something went terribly wrong, didn’t it?




HARVEY

(Now WORRIED and TREMBLING and stutters trying to speak but has no words)




GATEKEEPER

Does the name, Blackburn ring any bells?

HARVEY

(still STUTTERING and CLENCHES his fist)
Black...burn?

GATEKEEPER

Mhm, the Blackburns. Maximillion Blackburn your local MP owned the house that you burgled but you already know that. Pretty successful guy wouldn’t you say? A ton of money, a big house and… a… Son.

HARVEY

(Slams his clenched fist onto the table)

You Bastard…




GATEKEEPER

Language Mr Webber. Swearing is also a Sin, you wouldn’t want  that to go on your list of sins alongside the Blackburn incident, would you?




HARVEY

Whatever.




GATEKEEPER

Now! Mr Webber! Tell me what happened in that house!

               




             HARVEY

I never meant for it to turn out this way. It was meant to be a quick job, in and out. Nothing more.




GATEKEEPER

But it didn’t turn out that way, did it?




HARVEY

I know…we was so confident that everything was going to be fine, we planned out everything. We were prepared for every possible situation.




GATEKEEPER

But what happened?




HARVEY
We didn’t plan for him to be there.  




GATEKEEPER

He got in the way didn’t he?




HARVEY

He was the cause of all of this, my life was ruined because of him.




GATEKEEPER

Entering the Blackburn’s house, what could you see?







Narration to come back to








GATEKEEPER

So as you left the house you made eye contact with the Blackburn's son?




HARVEY

Yes. It was the adrenaline. I could hear his father's car arriving back home and I didn’t have long to make a decision.




GATEKEEPER

It wasn’t just eye contact you gave him was it? You took the boy




HARVEY

He had seen my face. I couldn’t risk it. But after taking him I had no idea what to do with him.




GATEKEEPER

What happened to him?




HARVEY

He was being too loud, he needed to be taken care of. His father was in the driveway, we needed to get out of there.




GATEKEEPER

To where?




HARVEY

Anywhere, just away from that dreaded house. He was kicking and screaming and punching me. God, I couldn’t wait to shut him up.




GATEKEEPER

That’s when it happened, the action that determined your fate, the reason why you’re here!




HARVEY
It was out of impulse. It was instinct.




… I took his life.




GATEKEEPER

*slow clapping* That wasn’t so hard now was it?   But, how did you end up here?

-Silence from Harvey-

Mr Webber, one can only be summoned to Purgatory once they die.




HARVEY

It felt like the right thing to do. The only way out. My life was ruined. My life wasn’t worth living. There was only one thing left to do.




GATEKEEPER

Your final sin.
































SCENE CHANGES TO FLASH BACK

    
 Scene cuts to showing back door of house unlocked and slightly open

     Harvey looks around the house to see if anyone is home, looking through windows and moving very cautiously

 Rear mid shot following Harvey as he goes through the door and looks around the house to see if anyone is home, looking through windows and moving very cautiously

Camera then  takes close up shots of pictures scattered around the house to show us his victims, then he goes into the bedrooms to look for a safe, which may include money or jewellery.


Once he has gathered enough loot he takes his leave and makes eye contact with the Blackburn’s child who is standing at the top of the staircase.

Noise of car coming into the driveway which is suggested to be the Father. Harvey drops the loot, runs up the stairs and manhandles the child dragging him down the stairs then slinging him over his shoulder and leaves the loot behind taking the child out of the backdoor.

Harvey proceeds to lower the child to shoulder to shoulder with his arm around the kid, running through neighbour’s gardens while the child proceeds to keep kicking and punching and screaming out loud. Childs lucky punch lets Harvey’s grip loosen giving the child a brief moment to escape from him. Harvey rugby tackles the child to the ground to show dominance and capture the kid once more.

The two come across an empty garden with a treehouse which Harvey leads the resistant kid to. Forcefully being pushed by Harvey towards the treehouse. The two enter the treehouse after another small conflict and Harvey proceeds to murder the child with a knife Harvey had on him. Harvey walks out of the treehouse alone, drops the knife and wipes a smear of blood off of his face.





SCENE CHANGES TO PURGATORY



Tuesday, 16 January 2018

single camera production ideas



Single camera production draft ideas for ‘Purgatory’.

Purgatory
·       Guy dies at the start. Mix in footage from POV when being hung with other content quick short cuts. Like a horror film.  
·       Guy wakes up in Purgatory, finds himself sitting opposite to a mysterious man with only a desk between them.
·       Mysterious Man welcomes guy to Purgatory, and explains the only to get to heaven is to amend his sins through confessing. 
Possible Confessions 

·       Murder - "Reasonably easy" - Alfie suggests rope to strangle X person.  
·       Robbery - House (X climbs over garden gate to get into house and break in and steals expensive items in bag) 
·       Kidnaping - abducting one or more people to add tot he story of the plot
·       Domestic Violence - Beats wife 
·       Suicide - Cannot live with what was committed, kills self by hanging or overdose. 


 Locations 
Purgatory| Kieran's attic 
Murder | Lounge 
Robbery| Kieran's house 
Kidnaping| Kieran's garage/cellar  
Suicide| Lounge/ tree 

Structure

Character X dies. Some evidence of his death is revealed through POV camera shot, mixed in with introductory scene. 
Character wakes up in Purgatory, finds himself sitting opposite to a mysterious man with only a desk between them.  
Mysterious Man welcomes guy to Purgatory, and explains the only to get to heaven is to amend his sins through confessing. 
Character X confesses a small sin in the hope of getting to Heaven without confessing about any others. 

Character Y knowing the sins already he goes along with it, while coxing Character X into confessing others. Character Y reminds Character X piece by piece of the past disgraceful actions he has committed. We find out about Character X's previous life, his hobbies, his crimes and his reason for each crime.    

Purgatory script

Google Docs link:  https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LdNpqgMX9EamUJ8M1MOGHbw-sc8EOaTlo9QGacOlTL4/edit?usp=sharing PURGATOR...